Living in a Utopia

Astrid's WordsNovember 7, 2018November 28, 2019PoetryDiscovery, dVerse, Life, Poetry, Spirit

Living in a utopia

Floating amidst the dream of perfection

Where nothing can go wrong

Everything’s a welcoming intersection

Freedom for all explorations

Peaceful discovery of all life gifts

All creatures and spirits

In harmonious existence where hate drifts

There are no set competitions

-Peaceful interrelations among friends-

Days filled with beginnings

Never fearful of inevitable ends

Submitted to dVerse for Poetics: Utopia

Published by Astrid's Words

Astrid Hardjana-Large is an inspirational author who enjoys Life and adversity. She is motivated to share her inspiration from Life experiences and encourages readers to persevere on the journey of Life. View more posts

6 thoughts on “Living in a Utopia”

Gina says:

November 8, 2018 at 09:55

i would like that a place where kindness rules and we are giving a chance at new beginnings and don’t fear failure – a well crafted poem about the things that relaly matter

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1. Astrid's Words says:
  
  November 8, 2018 at 20:25
  
  Thanks, Gina
  
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Gospel Isosceles says:

November 8, 2018 at 08:42

This existence of which you speak sounds boring to critics who need some sense of conflict no matter the magnitude. In literature, yes, I believe conflict must have a place. But in society? Why?

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1. Astrid's Words says:
  
  November 8, 2018 at 20:25
  
  Very true😁
  
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Björn Rudberg (brudberg) says:

November 7, 2018 at 15:17

I wonder if we would think utopia to be perfect or if we need some flaws to feel that we are living.

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1. Astrid's Words says:
  
  November 7, 2018 at 16:49
  
  Depends what mindset we want to be in.
  
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