Amidst the Haze


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Amidst the haze, we ponder
Anticipate a cool shower
There is darkness before light
And it’s blinding preconceived sight
A new beginning awaits
As we patiently endure rain
Raindrops skew our vision
As it washes away the old
And welcomes to life something new

6 responses to “Amidst the Haze”

  1. Frank Hubeny Avatar
    Frank Hubeny

    I like the welcoming of the new.

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  2. kim881 Avatar
    kim881

    A refreshing quadrille, Astrid, with the anticipation of a cool shower and the imagery in lines:
    ‘Raindrops skew our vision
    As it washes away the old
    And welcomes to life something new’.

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  3. Jo Avatar
    Jo

    I love your last line!

    Liked by 1 person

  4. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar
    Björn Rudberg (brudberg)

    Love how the rain bring a freshness to the world.

    Liked by 1 person

  5. Arcadia Maria Avatar
    Arcadia Maria

    I also like this refreshing take on this prompt. Well written.

    Liked by 1 person

  6. sanaarizvi Avatar
    sanaarizvi

    Love this! Such a breath of fresh air.. your quadrille 💜💜

    Liked by 1 person

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