Freckle our Paths with Life


On hot days when humidity rises, 

We stare at paths adorned by sunlight. 

Patiently waiting for clouds to hover, 

Never certain if they’ll release their tears, 

Yet feeling hopeful and parched. 

“Shower down on us!” 

We beg the sky. 

“Freckle our paths with life!” 

 

A Quadrille submitted to dVerse with the prompt to use the word freckle.

13 responses to “Freckle our Paths with Life”

  1. rothpoetry Avatar
    rothpoetry

    Well done Astrid!

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    1. Astrid's Words Avatar
      Astrid’s Words

      Thanks, Dwight!

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  2. larry trasciatti Avatar
    larry trasciatti

    Nice use of freckle as a different kind of mark

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    1. Astrid's Words Avatar
      Astrid’s Words

      Thanks

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  3. Phillip Scott Avatar
    Phillip Scott

    “Freckle our paths with life!” – what a gorgeous line and thought!

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    1. Astrid's Words Avatar
      Astrid’s Words

      Thank you!

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  4. Frank Hubeny Avatar
    Frank Hubeny

    Nice last line. I like the thought of wanting the sky to release its tears.

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    1. Astrid's Words Avatar
      Astrid’s Words

      Thanks, Frank.

      Liked by 1 person

  5. msjadeli Avatar
    msjadeli

    I like the idea of rain freckling the land with life. What a fresh (and refreshing!) perspective. We need some freckling here also!

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    1. Astrid's Words Avatar
      Astrid’s Words

      Thanks, we’re all begging the sky silently.

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      1. msjadeli Avatar
        msjadeli

        YW Astrid

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  6. Mish Avatar
    Mish

    I picture those raindrops freckling the path, little polka-dots reminding us we need the rain sometimes too. I enjoyed this very unique use of the word. 🙂

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    1. Astrid's Words Avatar
      Astrid’s Words

      Thanks, Mish. I’m glad you caught the fun in my words. I love watching raindrops freckling a path, it brings great joy.

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