You Can’t Do It All


Stop making me feel small,

You can’t do it all.

Be real.

It isn’t your call,

Even if I fall,

I’ll heal.

Life turns like a ball,

I won’t remain small.

 

Leave me on my own.

I have surely grown,

I’ll learn.

Many times, I’ve shown

I’m fine on my own.

Don’t yearn.

I’ve often been thrown,

Without breaking bones.

 

I will find my call,

Make it through it all,

Survive.

It’s a game of ball.

Maybe I’ll appall,

Revive.

You can’t do it all,

Stop making me feel small.

 

As parents, there are times when we care and want to give the best to our children but don’t realize how that could make them feel. They need guidance, but we can’t prevent their hardships because they are where they are to learn and grow.  They desire freedom to discover their strengths and develop independence.

This is my first attempt at a Lai Nouveau poem inspired by dVerse for this month’s poetry forms challenge.

6 responses to “You Can’t Do It All”

  1. calmkate Avatar
    calmkate

    I think you did superbly, love the rhyme
    and kids need room to become independent …

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  2. Sabio Lantz Avatar
    Sabio Lantz

    Nicely done. A reminder to parent and child — or anyone, actually

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Sabio Lantz Avatar
      Sabio Lantz

      Hey Astrid, You went to my philosophy blog. My poetry blog is here.

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Astrid's Words Avatar
        Astrid’s Words

        Thanks, I’m glad I found the philosophy blog as well.

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  3. Beverly Crawford Avatar
    Beverly Crawford

    Great write. There’s something about the nouveau without the two-syllable closing that leaves me wanting to finish it! It’s sort of “versus interruptus” to my sensitivity! lol

    Liked by 1 person

  4. Frank Hubeny Avatar
    Frank Hubeny

    It is good to let others have a chance to do things.

    Liked by 1 person

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