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What is wrong with difficulty?
It is the tool that helps one grow
It offers direction to reality
What is wrong with a slight casualty?
Some are hidden and some are an obvious show
What is wrong with difficulty?
Is there no patience to let things happen gradually?
Life doesn’t happen in one big blow
It offers direction to reality
Everyone finds their call eventually
And they will learn to go with the flow
What is wrong with difficulty?
Can we allow others to journey happily?
Let them enjoy their moment to grow
It offers direction to reality
There’s no control over life or another’s mentality
Disappointment isn’t what we need to show
What is wrong with difficulty?
It offers direction to reality
A Villanelle submitted to dVerse
Once again, you show how to use the repeating lines to great effect when entertaining philosophical questions. Lovely.
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Thanks, Victoria.
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I really like this line: Can we allow others to journey happily?
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There’s power in the struggle! Thanks for sharing Astrid! I am a Creative Life Coach with a poetry blog and today’s here is today’s in case you have time to look? It is also a Villanelle!
https://peacockpoetryblog.wordpress.com/2019/04/05/blurred-lines/
I am also on Instagram as #coachingcreatively, let’s follow each other if you use this medium? You can also find me on Facebook under Sam Allen wearing a bright red and orange hat!
I love connecting with fellow creatives as you can see!
Sunny greetings from Switzerland!
Sam 🙂
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Thanks, Sam.
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My pleasure!
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It offers direction to reality – I loved this and so true!
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I really like the use of questions in your repeating lines. It’s one of those essential questions to be asked over and over again. I love it when a form adds meaning, or works synergistically with the content like this. By the way, I couldn’t see it linked to Mr Linky, so other people may not get to read it, which would be a shame.
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Thanks
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Love how you eneded this piece.
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