Be an Anteater

,

A vacuum to suck away dirt and dust

Is like an anteater clearing the bugs

There are times when it’s an absolute must

To clear build up on the surface and rugs

 

Into corners, they tend to stay gathered

Out of sight until they decide to grow

Healthy cleanliness, wouldn’t you rather?

A place of comfort that will always show

 

After the vacuum eats the dirty grime

It’s waste can be tossed in the garbage bin

It’s a task that requires work and time

To reorder the state your home is in

 

Be an anteater for a cleaning day

It reorganizes the disarray

 

While teaching a child the fun of a vacuum, imagination was required to make it fun. Vacuuming sounded boring and wasn’t favourable until I suggested pretending to be an anteater. Just imagine the dirt and dust as ants and our hand-held vacuum as anteater. It’ll be fun feeding our vacuum while the house gets cleaned.

And so now we know what we must be to work together and keep the house clean.

Submitted to dVerse for Poetry Forms: the Sonnet

13 responses to “Be an Anteater”

  1. Sunshiny SA, Kavitha Avatar
    Sunshiny SA, Kavitha

    Thanks Astrid, will have to show the children this.

    Like

    1. Astrid's Words Avatar
      Astrid’s Words

      Chores are fun when treated as a game.Have fun!

      Liked by 1 person

  2. msjadeli Avatar
    msjadeli

    Great idea and very fun sonnet!

    Like

  3. rob kistner Avatar
    rob kistner

    What a fascinating sonnet Astrid. I really enjoyed it… 🙂

    Like

  4. rothpoetry Avatar
    rothpoetry

    A very interesting and clever poem. The necessary cleaning to keep life and our space in good order. Well done Astrid.

    Liked by 1 person

  5. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar
    Björn Rudberg (brudberg)

    What a fun topic for a sonnet.

    Liked by 1 person

  6. engre.poet Avatar
    engre.poet

    If cleaning could be so fun

    Like

    1. Astrid's Words Avatar
      Astrid’s Words

      It is what we make it and I preferred fun😀

      Like

  7. Frank Hubeny Avatar
    Frank Hubeny

    I hadn’t thought of an anteater as a vacuum before, but then I haven’t seen many of them. Nice perspective.

    Liked by 1 person

  8. Gina Avatar
    Gina

    a quirky sonnet and i think will be an educational one too for younger readers. fascinating how a little imagination can get more work done!!

    Liked by 1 person

  9. Sherry Blue Sky Avatar
    Sherry Blue Sky

    This was fun to read. Reminded me of a sonnet I once wrote to a flooding basement, lol.

    Liked by 1 person

  10. Lona Gynt Avatar
    Lona Gynt

    This is fun, it does not suck, even if the subject does (the vacuum). I love what you did here, it is really a lot of fun, I can hear Mary Poppins singing about a spoonful of sugar etc. I might even go and vacuum something someday. 😉

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Astrid's Words Avatar
      Astrid’s Words

      Thanks, Lona. I’m glad it sparked some fun😀

      Liked by 1 person

Leave a comment

This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.