Puzzled

Astrid's WordsJuly 31, 2018November 15, 2019PoetryChallenge, Change, dVerse, Growth, Poetry

Is this for the corner or center?
In which way will this enter?
Is this a fragment of the whole?
Can a small piece effect the toll?
When will the picture come together?
Combine the small to make it big
Don’t stay puzzled forever

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Astrid Hardjana-Large is an inspirational author who enjoys Life and adversity. She is motivated to share her inspiration from Life experiences and encourages readers to persevere on the journey of Life. View more posts

7 thoughts on “Puzzled”

Mish says:

August 4, 2018 at 08:16

Love the metaphor throughout. Maybe we waste too much of our precious time being puzzled.

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1. Astrid's Words says:
  
  August 6, 2018 at 09:53
  
  Appreciation of small pieces lets the puzzle settle into place.
  
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Ali Grimshaw says:

August 3, 2018 at 00:34

I like this as a philosophical poem. Life can be full of these questions.

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Arcadia Maria says:

July 31, 2018 at 20:41

I like this take on the prompt, especially the closing lines: “Combine the small to make it big/Don’t stay puzzled forever”. Good advice for anyone.

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1. Astrid's Words says:
  
  July 31, 2018 at 22:53
  
  Thanks!
  
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Björn Rudberg (brudberg) says:

July 31, 2018 at 15:30

I think you have to know where to start… it’s always like that with puzzles.

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Frank Hubeny says:

July 31, 2018 at 12:14

That’s what I ask of the puzzle I’m working on: “When will the picture come together?”

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