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Patiently strive to embark upon light
For darkness withers when time to waken
Endure with diligence to conquer fights
For confident efforts can’t be shaken
Carry kindness for connectivity
For the act of giving is receiving
Add humility in your endeavors
For you can be proud without deceiving
Submitted to dVerse
This has a nice, easy rhythm and unhurried pace to it.
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I’m glad it coincides with the calmness of working with virtue.
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Hmm.. wonder if when
one Feels Pride and
doesn’t
Show
it if that
is a kind
of Deceit
too.. for true
on the Street at
Least the Fearless
Confident and Meek man
this way isn’t afraid to show
Fearless in Confidence that is
Truly earned all Natural Pride no
Different than a Lion in the Wild and
A Best Part
oF aLL is
it is actually
A Virtue too
for ‘Smaller
Men’ do not
stand nearly
as much of a
Chance to Attack
And Suffer the Consequences
of Bothering a Lion at Rest.. hehe..
other wise bothering A Deceit oF Fear..
True this
Human
Stuff
is Truly
Complicated
all sides of the
issues explored and given..;)
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It forms a deceit for the self when one can’t admit what is true.
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Absolutely..:)
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It all starts with patience. Nice poem, the meanings carry the rhymes rather than being subsumed by them, very pretty
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Some sound advice, Astrid.
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Nice line and observation: “For the act of giving is receiving”
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A wonderful post Astrid! I love the line …for darkness withers when time to awaken!!
Dwight
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Thanks, Dwight.
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I liked that too
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