Under the spell of obedience,
A programmed, orderly experience.
Wisps of wonder awaken,
Questioning reason to listen.
Spirit of discovery is born,
Following orders feel so forlorn.
There’s a call to take on ventures,
To find passion in the center.
Revitalize a strong consensus,
Follow your path with peaceful senses.
Experience what feels true to you,
Make a passionate life be true.
Astrid's Words 
Obedience can be like a spell. I like your poem and its message.
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